CM: CinderHasFallen

The first thing i noticed when looking at this picture was the complete lack of shading.
Well.. it'd be unfair to say complete. You do have some kind of shade effect going on in the form of lineweight, which is something i struggle with myself. Respect for pulling that off. But the colours themselves are flat blocks of colour.
i can understand if maybe you feel like very detailed shading isn't really your style, but atleast consider adding some cellshading ( myfavouritefetish.deviantart.c… this is what i mean)
That would add alot more depth and liveliness to your art.
Also on the hands; they look well-done but the hands that holding eachother look bigger than the others
And last but not least; the top the girl is wearing almost looks like it's part of her skin. You did put some distance between the legs and the edge of her skirt, so why did you forget it with her top?